The Beginnings of an Idea
I'm assuming that this is supposed to be rendering of an eye with some strange shape/effect taking place within the iris. It's an interesting concept and certainly deserves a better and more complete go.
Do it again (or do a further rendering of this one) and take your time to truly convey what is happening here. Because right now this is either a strange mystical effect taking place in the host's eye.... or tetris blocks arranged in a circle.
Nowhere Near Completion
The line work (while I'm a fan of the sketchy look and regularly employ it myself) is not rendered well at all. That isn't even touching the much to be desired shape of your take on the Triforce.
For example, your beveling of the shapes does not indicate any perspective of the shape.
Honestly, I would expect about the same quality of work to come out of an excited kindergartner. At least I could applaud a child's effort.
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.